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 Posted: Mon Jul 6th, 2015 12:14 pm
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binny97
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Hey there! My friend and I recently started work on the second draft of our movie script, which we're slowly realizing might be better suited for a stage production.

It's a dialogue based script inspired by films like Before Sunrise and Carnage (which is based on a play), focusing on two infatuated teens dealing with their reservations with the other and love in general.

We'd like to get feedback on two things:

* General feedback on everything from dialogue to structure to characters etc.

* comments on how producible the would be as a play. What might need to be changed, what has to go, and what can stay as it is.

Here is the script:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8EyU2o1wcdtNTB2Wm5ER3BBTlk/view?usp=sharing

Thanks for your time!

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 Posted: Mon Jul 6th, 2015 03:24 pm
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Binny.

Everyone here is a playwright with plays in various states, from produced many times to in-progress. We've been hanging around for a long time.

We have seen many people join, post a play or a link to a play, and expect that everyone will read and give feedback. In my experience, it just doesn't work like that. You have to hang around too. Maybe comment on a few things, a few plays, and then post yours.

Typically, when someone posts right away, we never hear from them again.

Best of luck.

Paddy

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