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 Posted: Wed Jul 29th, 2015 08:49 pm
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So cold
in its openness

Colder yet
in its promises

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Stunning. I couldn't relate to it more (unfortunately). Ten words sums up a lifetime. Your work has always been brilliant and insightful. This piece comes from a deep, personal, somber place. I felt you reach in and capture the essence of the Third Act. Thank you.

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 Posted: Thu Jul 30th, 2015 04:34 am
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Thank you, Edd. Appreciate your words here.

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timmy,

One punch to the kidney.

One punch to the head.

KNOCKOUT!

Rocky Balboa time.

best,

IMR

P.S. edd, your comment is…you must know…as poetic as timmy's poem.

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Left me with shivers. It gives me, a young man, the feeling of being much older. As if I was in the Final Act, and though I can relate to the basic sentiment of the poem, I feel much closer to being there. The mark of a true artist. Your poems are always on point.

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