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 Posted: Fri Oct 27th, 2006 06:02 pm
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timmy
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find words that taste of salt,

pass them to me in our bed,

toss them over your shoulder

sighing granules of white

barter with them with me

in the desert, in the heat

of our passion they are desire

 

a small taste at baptism, marriage

sealed, Lot’s wife purified

with only a single salty glance 

Judas spilled at supper,

left hung suspended with guilt

 

dissolved, they remain free,

floating, reconnecting to reform

themselves in afterlife, they are

what remains traceable

 

blood of my blood,

a portable commodity

 

sometimes, you don’t feel my salt

as it spins nervous circles

so simple,

so plentiful

shaking salvation

with its taste

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