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They set up a fund
to send her a rose.
Each day she had
to stand on her own,
going over and over
what they did to her,
the lads from the rugby club
in the night club.

She has no name,
but they have.



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Nicely done. Just enough left out for us to put it all together.

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What we can - but don't want to imagine...is where we don't want to go.

And when you try not to think about it...it comes back.

John is spot on.

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IMR



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