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 Posted: Sun Nov 5th, 2006 04:29 pm
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John Watts
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RAIN

Soft rain

Clear descending pearls

Hard rain

Collision of tears

Rain soft

Caressing the skin

Rain hard

Harried run to desolation

Obedient submission to certainty

To floods glutted by bounty

To drought starved by remission

Caressing cloaking frantic remorseless

Every bead enjoined

Detached from consequence

To gentle mist beguiled by blossoms

To land enriched from silt dispersed

To ravaged souls trampled and drowned 

Rain descends and with acquiescence I submit

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