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Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Talent Hunting (4 replies - 3621 views)

Good.  Glad you are inspired to work it!  Would be interested to see the next draft. ...   Thu Aug 31st, 2006 01:10 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Talent Hunting (4 replies - 3621 views)

Hi Lostsocks.  Will give you my initial response and hope it helps.  I thought it was interesting and provocative.  To me it was about hypocrisy ...   Thu Aug 31st, 2006 12:46 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Night Flight (5 replies - 4930 views)

Hi Kate!  Have arrived back from holiday to your poem.  Love it.  I first read it as an escape into fiction.  That hold idea of reinventing ...   Thu Aug 31st, 2006 12:37 pm

Take the Stage > You want a social life, with friends (1 reply - 9168 views)

Hi Swann.  I refer you to my PM earlier!  It was kind of what I was saying to you about life getting in the way ...   Wed Aug 9th, 2006 03:50 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > ode to Frank Sinatra (5 replies - 4308 views)

True! x ...   Wed Aug 9th, 2006 03:46 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > ode to Frank Sinatra (5 replies - 4308 views)

Thanks Timmy for your very interesting response.  I have been so impressed at the way you just keep posting, and good stuff too.  It is ...   Wed Aug 9th, 2006 03:12 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Haiku (5 replies - 4231 views)

Hi Kate.  Powerful Haiku.  It is a fascinating way to try and say something economically and an excellent way to start writing poetry don't you ...   Wed Aug 9th, 2006 10:41 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > ode to Frank Sinatra (5 replies - 4308 views)

Timmy, I love your poetry.  Can I ask you a question?  Do you write each day?  Are these poems from a bank you have built ...   Wed Aug 9th, 2006 10:36 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Shopping (4 replies - 3169 views)

No pointy sticks!  Laughing and loving it! x ...   Wed Aug 9th, 2006 10:34 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Grasshopper (9 replies - 5966 views)

It's on the calendar! x ...   Mon Aug 7th, 2006 08:08 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Grasshopper (9 replies - 5966 views)

Gosh Kate!  That is alarming.  I am certain it was dead when I flushed it down the toilet!  Maybe it is a regressed grasshopper or ...   Mon Aug 7th, 2006 07:41 pm

Take the Stage > Ravenhill on teaching people to write plays (9 replies - 7520 views)

I have to say that I don't agree with him.  I think dialogue (or at least interesting dialogue) is incredibly difficult to write, but nothing ...   Mon Aug 7th, 2006 06:04 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Grasshopper (9 replies - 5966 views)

Glad to brighten your day Kate!  Your comments were great.  I actually thought that I  would probably get seriously slated for it being a big ...   Mon Aug 7th, 2006 05:45 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Grasshopper (9 replies - 5966 views)

Thanks very much CoreUpted.  Really appreciate you taking the trouble to read it.  I used "doinked" and "lolloped" partly because they are onomatopoeaic (is that ...   Mon Aug 7th, 2006 05:41 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Re-writes > Expatriate Marriage (9 replies - 10329 views)

Ignore them Kate.  They have never been worth it.  Stay here, critique, write and move forward to more success.  You will x ...   Mon Aug 7th, 2006 03:45 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Grasshopper (9 replies - 5966 views)

I’m bored today all.  Bored and with a dry head.  Can’t get into my play AT ALL.  Had a busy, family type weekend and am ...   Mon Aug 7th, 2006 01:02 pm

Critique my Play > The Expatriate Marriage (10 replies - 6057 views)

Not kindness Swann, but genuine response x ...   Mon Aug 7th, 2006 12:54 pm

Critique my Play > The Expatriate Marriage (10 replies - 6057 views)

Loved this again Swann.  I am so engaged with the characters immediately I start reading this play, and I don't want it to stop.  The ...   Mon Aug 7th, 2006 11:55 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > contrition (2 replies - 2978 views)

Timmy I love this.  I am going to give you my initial responses and gut reactions that I hope will help you to make ‘changing ...   Mon Aug 7th, 2006 10:35 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Redrafted poem - still no title! (9 replies - 6103 views)

Thanks Timmy.  Have looked at some of your poetry too.  Would like you to post some more also.  Poetry is such an interesting genre to ...   Sun Aug 6th, 2006 05:30 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Short (20 replies - 10256 views)

Thanks Scenedreamer.  Will think about all you have said. ...   Sun Aug 6th, 2006 05:27 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Short (20 replies - 10256 views)

Yes he is white, but I rather liked the assumption of blackness as assumptions are a theme.  ...   Sat Aug 5th, 2006 06:28 am

Take the Stage > Thanks to Edd, Paddy and Paul! (11 replies - 7417 views)

Well this has got nicely out of control!  When you said should you thank anyone else Playfull, evidently Coreupted!  Bless her!  Hilarious!  Anyway Playfull, to ...   Fri Aug 4th, 2006 06:52 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Redrafted poem - still no title! (9 replies - 6103 views)

Do you know what Paddy?  Write now, so do I.  There is something that just doesn't feel right about this second version.  I am going ...   Fri Aug 4th, 2006 02:50 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Short (20 replies - 10256 views)

Fantastic advice thanks Paddy.  I am wrestling it now as it happens!  I think you are right about switching the openining around, especially after what ...   Fri Aug 4th, 2006 02:48 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Short (20 replies - 10256 views)

Great story Boz!  Perhaps we should co-write a play in a jeweller's shop?! X ...   Fri Aug 4th, 2006 02:41 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Short (20 replies - 10256 views)

Great idea!  I was in the jewellers the other day, buying wedding rings (excited me!)  Next to me was another couple doing the same.  The ...   Fri Aug 4th, 2006 02:23 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Short (20 replies - 10256 views)

Wow Kate, Edd, Swann!  Thanks!  I will get my head down and give it a go! ...   Fri Aug 4th, 2006 02:04 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Short (20 replies - 10256 views)

You are my computer guardian angel Edd.  ...   Fri Aug 4th, 2006 02:01 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Redrafted poem - still no title! (9 replies - 6103 views)

Thank you Kate and Edd.  I will try and leave it alone for a few days and see, as you suggest Kate.  And Edd, thanks ...   Fri Aug 4th, 2006 01:42 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Redrafted poem - still no title! (9 replies - 6103 views)

Ps no idea why it has changed font at the end!  That has nothing to do with the form and should look the same as ...   Fri Aug 4th, 2006 12:38 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Redrafted poem - still no title! (9 replies - 6103 views)

Hello all who have helped (and any one else!).  Could you please tell me if you think this works any better or if I have ...   Fri Aug 4th, 2006 12:37 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Me and You (20 replies - 10609 views)

It was a lovely dance Edd.  And I have actually posted a little something this morning! ...   Fri Aug 4th, 2006 12:23 pm

Take the Stage > Kate's bits (22 replies - 11919 views)

Swann,  I have a wonderful image of you, slippers on, latte in hand in a large,comfortable, slightly battered old armchair, with your bum firmly planted ...   Fri Aug 4th, 2006 11:56 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Short (20 replies - 10256 views)

Hi.  Thought I would start small and very carefully.  Have written this short this morning because I know I must get writing and give it ...   Fri Aug 4th, 2006 11:16 am

Take the Stage > Kate's bits (22 replies - 11919 views)

Hi Swann, I just wanted to say that I am breathless from your story.  Fascinating stuff.  I totally totally understand the introspection thing.  I haven't ...   Fri Aug 4th, 2006 09:35 am

Take the Stage > TPTT exiles............... (74 replies - 35425 views)

To Kate.  No problem!  It was a great play to discuss x ...   Fri Aug 4th, 2006 08:32 am

Take the Stage > TPTT exiles............... (74 replies - 35425 views)

CK!  How wonderful to see you here! Welcome, welcome.  It is a place of great atmosphere.  Hope you enjoy.  You will enrich the forum no ...   Fri Aug 4th, 2006 08:20 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > As yet untitled (12 replies - 7018 views)

Ah the timings!  Driving me mad!  I need that bit in there about the next day to show how she hides her life from the ...   Fri Aug 4th, 2006 08:18 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Me and You (20 replies - 10609 views)

Thanks Kate.  If only you knew how I sit here like a tortured soul day after day since I first posted thinking about writing drama!  Never ...   Fri Aug 4th, 2006 08:10 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > As yet untitled (12 replies - 7018 views)

Thanks Paddy and Leon.  It really is an infant at the moment.  The other one I wrote has had 4 years of tweaking!  Perhaps I'm ...   Fri Aug 4th, 2006 06:33 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Good Intentions (9 replies - 6146 views)

Or maybe the cough linctus will give it a new perspective!  Glad you are inspired x ...   Fri Aug 4th, 2006 06:27 am

Please, introduce yourself ... > This is Kate (30 replies - 14845 views)

I didn't realise you were Lewes!! Hi Lewes! x ...   Thu Aug 3rd, 2006 04:23 pm

Please, introduce yourself ... > This is Kate (30 replies - 14845 views)

By the way, Kate, if you are up for that, it might be an interesting idea.  I will leave it to you to start the ...   Thu Aug 3rd, 2006 03:53 pm

Please, introduce yourself ... > This is Kate (30 replies - 14845 views)

Laughing.  Glad there is someone out there who is as good at this stuff as me!  Thanks for trying! x ...   Thu Aug 3rd, 2006 03:52 pm

Please, introduce yourself ... > This is Kate (30 replies - 14845 views)

By the way Edd, would it be a good idea to move this discussion out to its own topic?  You are a technical bloke?  Can ...   Thu Aug 3rd, 2006 03:31 pm

Please, introduce yourself ... > This is Kate (30 replies - 14845 views)

Just butting in on Swann's question a bit here, but wow!  That sounds completely fascinating!  The regression part of it...er....can't you just interview people!!   So ...   Thu Aug 3rd, 2006 03:25 pm

Please, introduce yourself ... > This is Kate (30 replies - 14845 views)

Kate, welcome!  I'm sure I am not the only person who is delighted to see you here!  I am sure your contributions will be invaluable.  ...   Thu Aug 3rd, 2006 01:32 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Good Intentions (9 replies - 6146 views)

Well done for posting! Putting your writing up for public inspection is terrifying isn’t it?  I think Playfull said it is like being grabbed by ...   Thu Aug 3rd, 2006 10:53 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > As yet untitled (12 replies - 7018 views)

Thanks Edd.  I knew that last line wasn't right and I wanted her to sound empowered.  Not quite so sure about your haiku advice!! ...   Thu Aug 3rd, 2006 08:46 am


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