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The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Blair's Britain 0r 2070 (2 replies - 3777 views)

Hi Paddy,               (At the moment I've got "Neil Young live at Massey Hall 1971" on the headphones. He has a wonderful way with words.) Thank you ...   Sun Jul 15th, 2007 05:20 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Blair's Britain 0r 2070 (2 replies - 3777 views)

Following a meal out the three couples completed the evening by returning to Nigel and “Friggy’s” place. The ban on smoking had altered their life ...   Sat Jul 14th, 2007 06:51 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > A Woman to die for. (0 replies - 2376 views)

A woman to die for. I was shocked and saddened when I received the solicitor's letter. It told me that I was the sole named ...   Fri May 18th, 2007 06:55 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > response to challenge (3 replies - 4031 views)

Stranger than fiction. During one of my Summer Vacs at the LSE I got myself a job that involved: Collecting data from at least a dozen depts. Collating it Taking it ...   Sat May 5th, 2007 06:35 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > AFTER RETIREMENT (4 replies - 4168 views)

Hi,    The real problem is that most conversations that we ever have are of this nature. "Shall we have our tea now?" "Yes" "What: Tea now?" "Yes" "Shall I make ...   Sat May 5th, 2007 06:04 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Boring Play - The Cleaners (3 replies - 3740 views)

Watto M,              As Raj would say "spiffing good fun" Brian ...   Sat May 5th, 2007 05:55 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > At the Club 2 (0 replies - 2140 views)

At the Club-2   The Home and Colonial Club, (Not its real name, but I don’t want to risk a Libel action.), was the last refuge for ...   Sun Apr 15th, 2007 10:28 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > The Home and Colonial Club:Muscular Christians. (2 replies - 3231 views)

Hi Muncy,               Yes part 2 is drafted and I'll post it.Glad you enjoyed it.. Thanks for your time and comments, Brian. Re cheating they were jumping on the ...   Sun Apr 15th, 2007 10:18 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > The Home and Colonial Club:Muscular Christians. (2 replies - 3231 views)

A group of ageing men were sat in a leather chair circle and all but one were listening intently. The exception being the Rajah: He ...   Sun Apr 15th, 2007 11:21 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Nice Knowing You (2 replies - 3172 views)

Hi KMX,            This had a feel of Pinter about it. It seemed very "retro". The three voices read very similarly and it is difficult to ...   Sat Apr 7th, 2007 08:46 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Fishing (6 replies - 5609 views)

Hi SD,          I agree with previous comments regarding repetition.However you have captured the "feel" of a group of children. Passing comment, I doubt that in England ...   Sat Apr 7th, 2007 08:34 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Ever in his shadow (8 replies - 7480 views)

Hi SD,          Thanks for your time and comments. I listened to people here and elsewhere and attempted to correct SPAG and have altered the ending. Which ...   Sat Apr 7th, 2007 08:09 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > A Pervert's Lot (0 replies - 2092 views)

Extract from The Pervets of Penzance. When a pervert's not engaged in his perversion (His perversion) Or his pornographic books ceases to scan (ceases to ...   Sun Apr 1st, 2007 01:44 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Ever in his shadow (8 replies - 7480 views)

Morning Paddy,                         I cannot fully express the joy I felt at your response to this piece. As a writer you must understand how good it ...   Tue Mar 27th, 2007 06:58 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Ever in his shadow (8 replies - 7480 views)

Watto Poet,                   I certainly took no offence. Re words, it is the Am-Dram in me, Sundered can be thundered, and Riven can be driven Shattered's a little ...   Sun Mar 25th, 2007 08:25 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Ever in his shadow (8 replies - 7480 views)

Watto Poet,                   First my only defensible position-Sundered. The word's full meaning is "shattered into pieces". Split does not imply irrepairable damage. SPAG-The more I try to ...   Sun Mar 25th, 2007 04:19 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Ever in his shadow (8 replies - 7480 views)

At six foot five father towered over all of us even when were fully grown, which in my case was to a modest five foot ...   Sat Mar 24th, 2007 12:25 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Hello? Is anybody out there? (3 replies - 4144 views)

A straightforward answer-NO. I've only tried "am-dram" companies. They tend to stick to the tried and tested. Or works written by members of the group. It's ...   Mon Mar 19th, 2007 05:26 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Waiting for a Train (10 replies - 7638 views)

Re Waiting for Godot,                                  This quite true, the printer forgot to print the Final Act. The Author never went to rehearsals. He had a fit ...   Sun Feb 18th, 2007 02:49 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > A Tangled Web (8 replies - 6852 views)

Hi IMR 2,              This started out as a pop at the sharks who feed off "would be writers". Winning competutions; no matter how valueless; and ...   Sun Feb 18th, 2007 02:35 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > A Tangled Web (8 replies - 6852 views)

Hi Muncy,              "I find it a little too fantastic to be done straight,"  I'm doing it Peta's favourite way, tongue in cheek, Bri. ...   Sun Feb 18th, 2007 02:29 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > A Tangled Web (8 replies - 6852 views)

Hi IMR, "I would be at my police station/FBI/Scotland Yard with an attorney right quick turning the other scumbag in." What, I got £10k and £1 a ...   Sun Feb 18th, 2007 02:27 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > A Tangled Web (8 replies - 6852 views)

An aside,               I wander between 3 web-sites and I don't think I've written anything that has had the same response from all three. This one ...   Sat Feb 17th, 2007 09:38 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Ants (2 replies - 3213 views)

Hi Paddy,               Thanks. Dung Beetle? Is that an oblique reference to the quality of my material? That is, that they're  what is likely to come ...   Sat Feb 17th, 2007 09:31 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Ants (2 replies - 3213 views)

I know that they get into everything, swarm all over the place. But they're very clean, neat, orderly and so hard working. You see them ...   Sat Feb 17th, 2007 12:28 pm

The Playwrights' Gym > CHAT ROOM FLASH CHALLENGE!!!! (13 replies - 17628 views)

I can't get in the Green Room, my company's server won't let me. Brian ...   Tue Jan 16th, 2007 06:28 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Identity Theft Insurance (10 replies - 6420 views)

Hi Eezra,               Love the ideas, call centres and identity theft. But I think it would benefit from pruning, I must confess that I started to ...   Tue Jan 16th, 2007 06:19 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Flash Challenge - I have a lot of love to give. (2 replies - 2858 views)

Hi Muncy,                Great chat, I knew a woman just like her. At a party she introduced me and my late second wife in the following ...   Tue Jan 16th, 2007 06:09 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > A Tangled Web (8 replies - 6852 views)

Have had a computer crash, new computer and am using this as entry as a means of getting a link on my new E-Mail listing If ...   Fri Jan 12th, 2007 11:35 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > One Page Play (5 replies - 4228 views)

Oh Yes,oh yes, oh yes. "Salesman: Break down a lot does it? Driver: All the time" Other salient points: It's difficult to get into then get out again you have no ...   Wed Jan 3rd, 2007 05:31 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Alternate Emotions (13 replies - 9177 views)

Hi Poet,            Thanks for your time and comments. "BRN - yours actually made me laugh out loud (bad in an old-fashioned office that doesn't like us ...   Tue Jan 2nd, 2007 01:31 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > A Tangled Web (8 replies - 6852 views)

A Tangled Web. It started harmlessly enough, the old writer’s competition scam, small prizes, modest entry fee and the promise of Publication. The latter was not ...   Tue Jan 2nd, 2007 01:17 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Alternate Emotions (13 replies - 9177 views)

"That makes perfect sense" It certainly does, Happy New Year, Brian. ...   Tue Jan 2nd, 2007 08:57 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Alternate Emotions (13 replies - 9177 views)

Footnote on primness On  the website I was mentioning I had posted a spoof which included the line as pissed as pissed could be The Mod changed ...   Mon Jan 1st, 2007 05:28 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Alternate Emotions (13 replies - 9177 views)

Preamble. Do you remember at the end of Ghost Busters, one of the GBs shouts "I just love this town" and then the fantastic "Ghostbusters" song ...   Sun Dec 31st, 2006 05:26 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Hes Dead (6 replies - 4964 views)

This started really well when it was purely funny. "We’ve lived in New York for twenty years, didnt stop you crying rivers over him. His physical ...   Sun Dec 31st, 2006 02:35 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Alternate Emotions (13 replies - 9177 views)

SORRY ABOUT THE POSTING-I'VE GIVEN UP TRYING TO CORRECT IT OR I SHALL BE OVER TIME.   Senior Policeman. So, madam, despite the fact that you and your ...   Sun Dec 31st, 2006 01:19 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Alternate Emotions. (6 replies - 5589 views)

Hi Paddy,                Had echoes of "Who's aftraid of Virginia Woolf". As for the verdict I'd believe anything of that nature if it came from an ...   Sun Dec 31st, 2006 08:10 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Bikes at the end of the World (10 replies - 6912 views)

"Oh I have weaved much evil with my post"-Thanks all of you for your time and comments. Paddy-Have compromised and edited the final lines. PS-(Edd and I ...   Sun Dec 31st, 2006 07:45 am

Ideas & Suggestions > come clean (30 replies - 26237 views)

Re identities: On another Web-Site a poster turned up under the name of, "Little Hippo". She then posted a poem of mine "Eric Satie". I thought ...   Sat Dec 30th, 2006 06:46 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Bikes at the end of the World (10 replies - 6912 views)

I was only following orders-another fine mess you've got me in Edd. Thanks for your time and comments, either your Avatar is very flattering or you're ...   Fri Dec 29th, 2006 05:50 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Bikes at the end of the World (10 replies - 6912 views)

Hi SD,         Glad you liked it. However some background. In his "Granny" tale Edd  isued a challenge. Write a Play that uses the following  phrase ...   Fri Dec 29th, 2006 07:48 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Bikes at the end of the World (10 replies - 6912 views)

Daddy-What's the matter little one? Little One-Nothing. Daddy-Oh yes there is, I know my little girl inside out, so what’s the matter. Little One-It’s too silly for words. Daddy-Well ...   Thu Dec 28th, 2006 10:56 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > "The end of the world is here, and I'm still waiting for my bicycle." (2 replies - 3036 views)

I've done as you've asked. ...   Thu Dec 28th, 2006 07:43 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > "The end of the world is here, and I'm still waiting for my bicycle." (2 replies - 3036 views)

Daddy-What's the matter little one? Little one -Daddy, "The end of the world is here, and I'm still waiting for my bicycle."  Daddy -You got one for ...   Thu Dec 28th, 2006 07:00 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Life is just a cage. (12 replies - 8112 views)

Hi Scene Dreamer,                              I see you're a fellow anthropomorphist. Glad you liked it. I've become very attached to them and a tale from Bluey's POV ...   Thu Dec 21st, 2006 04:18 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Life is just a cage. (12 replies - 8112 views)

Hi Poet,             Glad you liked it. Thanks for your time and comments. Interesting points made about the brain. Regarding the Pineal Stalk there was some ...   Thu Dec 21st, 2006 04:14 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Life is just a cage. (12 replies - 8112 views)

Hi OD,          I've hit the Internet re Budgie Mags etc have found loads of sites however none would appear suitable, do you (or anybody else ...   Thu Dec 21st, 2006 06:51 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Life is just a cage. (12 replies - 8112 views)

Hi Robyn "I recently experienced budgies in the wild. They fly at 85kms an hour, man, and they are in groups of 100 or so and ...   Tue Dec 19th, 2006 08:01 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Life is just a cage. (12 replies - 8112 views)

Hi Robyn,                Thanks for your time and comments. "You have captured it well here."-That is praise indeed when it comes from someone who knows about Budgies. I'm ...   Tue Dec 19th, 2006 03:07 pm


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