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Critique my Play > First draft complete! Who want's to read? (9 replies - 6612 views)

Okay dokey smokey, I gave it a snoop. First thing off the start, make your dialogue more dynamic early, more realistic. No way Dan's spitting out ...   Wed Aug 12th, 2015 08:38 am

Critique my Play > I beg you for an honest and brutal critique, please. (2 replies - 3503 views)

Alrighty, I gave her a read! For the copy/paste thing: 1) No 2) Yes 3) No 4) Yes 5) Yes 6) Yes 7) No Firstly, I'm not sure what the plot is. I don't ...   Wed Aug 12th, 2015 08:25 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Bed Frame (1 reply - 2125 views)

I love the imagery here, well done. I do think it could use a bit of polishing, but that is just my personal opinion. With ...   Mon Aug 5th, 2013 03:08 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > The Kingdom of Childhood (1 reply - 2012 views)

It must be post-modern. You should name it 'edited to a blank page'. ...   Mon Aug 5th, 2013 02:49 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Re-writes > Script Consultant for Plays? (7 replies - 14342 views)

I don't mind email. You can message me as well on the site. Just so I know: so most of the dialogue of this play has ...   Wed Jul 10th, 2013 09:23 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Re-writes > Script Consultant for Plays? (7 replies - 14342 views)

Hello there, I am taking a look now and already see some suggestions to make. Let me know how you would like me to convey ...   Fri Jul 5th, 2013 02:47 pm

Work-in-Progress > How do you know how long to make your first play??? (6 replies - 6492 views)

To me, 60 pages is incredibly long for one act. I tend to want to write full length plays, but I can't see going much ...   Wed Jul 3rd, 2013 02:00 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Ending an upbeat but serious play with a sad ending or no? (7 replies - 7585 views)

I have always challenged the whole notion that each play and each character has to live up to some defined template. Like each main character ...   Mon Jul 1st, 2013 09:12 pm

Critique my Play > Flowers in a Firestorm (4 replies - 4520 views)

You have a good start, but it needs tightening and some work on the structure. I mean the structure part is my personal preference, but ...   Mon Jul 1st, 2013 08:07 pm

Please, introduce yourself ... > Hello All! (2 replies - 2772 views)

Welcome! We are here to give any advice needed, and to help you bring forth the best of what you have to offer. Dig in, post some ...   Mon Jul 1st, 2013 05:46 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Do You Remember? (2 replies - 2460 views)

Thanks for the feedback timmy! Yeah, I tend to avoid using any modern slang or terms. Just my style I think. I like the classic! Also, ...   Sat Jun 29th, 2013 03:30 pm

Please, introduce yourself ... > This is me (2 replies - 2774 views)

Hola Liz! Bring on some of your stuff! We're here to help you finish whatever you may want to finish! ...   Fri Jun 28th, 2013 09:21 pm

Please, introduce yourself ... > Please to meet you! (2 replies - 2997 views)

Hello AaronK! Welcome! ...   Fri Jun 28th, 2013 09:19 pm

Success Stories > POETRY QUESTION (3 replies - 7099 views)

The poem sounds familiar, but not sure. I'll dig around but I don't know a good resource to find poems. ...   Fri Jun 28th, 2013 05:53 pm

Success Stories > POETRY QUESTION (3 replies - 7099 views)

Spam... eww ...   Fri Jun 28th, 2013 05:52 pm

Collaborators > Newbie to the Genre - Needing a Partner (8 replies - 6051 views)

Hi there Art In Focus, I'm always willing to help in collaborations. Now I'm not a writing professional, I do it in my free time ...   Fri Jun 28th, 2013 02:59 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Re-writes > Script Consultant for Plays? (7 replies - 14342 views)

I think many of us here, me included, are willing to help in any polishing, revisioning, or brainstorming. Just let us know! :P ...   Fri Jun 28th, 2013 02:56 pm

Work-in-Progress > Questions for my play... (6 replies - 9533 views)

I agree with Paddy, give them a name, why not! As she said, if your play goes anywhere you want people to be able to ...   Fri Jun 28th, 2013 02:00 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Eurydice and Hades (3 replies - 3152 views)

I really like your imagery here, and it feels deep and mysterious, perhaps like the world Hades is used to. I think you should keep ...   Thu Jun 27th, 2013 03:43 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Testimony Of A Gentleman (0 replies - 1615 views)

Yes! Yes. Is that what you want from me? Yes! I love her! My Miss. Do you understand? Do your worst upon my good flesh, but know: She ...   Thu Jun 27th, 2013 03:33 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Do You Remember? (2 replies - 2460 views)

As fleeting feet draw me backwards Onwards do I see myself go Not broken by the art of lines Not buffed and shined or worn away Dip thy fingers ...   Tue Jun 25th, 2013 08:03 pm

Work-in-Progress > Tough Time (11 replies - 9234 views)

I agree with you, you never want to push a story. For me, I like to search out a blip of inspiration. I enjoy history ...   Mon Jun 4th, 2012 09:29 pm

Take the Stage > To Be or Not to be (5 replies - 4780 views)

The real greatness in many pieces of Shakespeare is that they are written in a way where they can be interpreted in many different ways, ...   Mon Jun 4th, 2012 09:03 pm

Critique my Play > A Night Walk (11 replies - 8872 views)

It's a decent piece! You could work from both before and after this scene and do a short play. I will say that you should ...   Mon Jun 4th, 2012 08:53 pm

Critique my Play > The Tragedy of Syntyche (3 replies - 3377 views)

Thanks for all the feedback! It is great to hear what I cannot see with my own eyes. I was fighting over the guards, but I ...   Wed May 30th, 2012 02:37 am

Take the Stage > To Be or Not to be (5 replies - 4780 views)

To me he's almost saying, to live or to die. Should I be, or should I not be. And then why. That was a cool clip on ...   Tue May 29th, 2012 01:04 am

Please, introduce yourself ... > Hello (6 replies - 4382 views)

Hello Edd, good to be aboard. ...   Tue May 29th, 2012 12:54 am

Critique my Play > The Tragedy of Syntyche (3 replies - 3377 views)

Thought I might as well post what I've been working on. It's a tragedy about a young rich woman in ancient Greece who is cast ...   Mon May 28th, 2012 10:13 pm

Critique my Play > Slut. (3 replies - 2727 views)

I fixed the formatting and re-saved it, hope it helps. I'll read it a bit later and respond with some feedback. ...   Mon May 28th, 2012 09:52 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > #26 (0 replies - 1724 views)

I write to you all of my joyous themes That has my fresh-ink’d hand a trembling My mind is quick to act on foamy dreams To thus convince ...   Mon May 28th, 2012 09:44 pm

Please, introduce yourself ... > Hello (6 replies - 4382 views)

Haha, no worries. I'm a bit exhausted myself! ...   Mon May 28th, 2012 09:36 pm

Collaborators > Composer Seeking Childen's Playwright (2 replies - 3503 views)

Hi Eric, I would love to help you in working with this production. It might be too late but let me know if you still ...   Mon May 28th, 2012 09:33 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Lyrics for my Father (2 replies - 2657 views)

Good poem Timmy. The only thing I would suggest is not to break it up with line breaks so much. Let a line flow full ...   Mon May 28th, 2012 09:30 pm

Please, introduce yourself ... > Hello (6 replies - 4382 views)

My name is not Alice. It's Allan. I blame the second L. ...   Mon May 28th, 2012 09:27 pm

Please, introduce yourself ... > Hello (6 replies - 4382 views)

Hi, my name is Allan West. I do enjoy writing plays and poetry. Nice to meet everyone...! ...   Mon May 28th, 2012 09:18 pm


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