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The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > No dialogue play challenge (14 replies - 10166 views)

Nicely done! I usually hate reading stage directions. I always looking to jump into what's being said, while reading or writing. But I really enjoyed ...   Fri Mar 2nd, 2007 06:50 pm

Critique my Play > Balls (7 replies - 5058 views)

Hi Billy, Thanks for your reply. No, I've been working on a set of one acts but I like the start on this one and intend to ...   Tue Feb 20th, 2007 08:03 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Re-writes > Identity Theft Insuarance (6 replies - 9411 views)

Hi Paddy, Again, thanks for reading. I agree with the initial phone conversations being a bit quirky. I may still do some editing on that, try ...   Tue Feb 13th, 2007 03:21 pm

Reviews and Critiques > In The Heights (2 replies - 3641 views)

For those of you in the NY tri-state area, I whole heartedly recommend In the Heights. It's a fantastic musical about the lives of latino ...   Sun Feb 11th, 2007 04:53 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Re-writes > Identity Theft Insuarance (6 replies - 9411 views)

Thanks for the wonderful response. I thought this piece was dead on the site. It's nice to know it got some interest. Eddie ...   Sun Feb 11th, 2007 04:43 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > My First Sub On Forum (14 replies - 10188 views)

Hi Jack, I like the writting. Very funny. Funny scenario. I did have some suggestions. I think it goes on a bit too long. It feels stretched ...   Sat Jan 27th, 2007 06:14 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Identity Theft Insurance (10 replies - 6527 views)

Hey guys, Just wanted to let you all know that I've posted a re-write in the revision section, if you'd care to take a look. Thanks for ...   Thu Jan 25th, 2007 11:14 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Re-writes > Identity Theft Insuarance (6 replies - 9411 views)

Here's a revision of this one act. Hope you all enjoy.                                                          Identity Theft                                       by                                    E. Ezra Antar                                         (A telemarketer, Rita, in her forties,                                     ...   Thu Jan 25th, 2007 11:12 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Identity Theft Insurance (10 replies - 6527 views)

Hi all, Thanks for your comments. I just finished a re-write and will post it soon. As for the climax. It's a tough one because I keep asking ...   Thu Jan 18th, 2007 03:30 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Hamelin. A play of sorts (34 replies - 22181 views)

In Media Res, I've gotta respond. I just don't see where you're drawing these conclusions from. Doubt was about "Doubt". It was about when to doubt, ...   Thu Jan 18th, 2007 02:30 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Hamelin. A play of sorts (34 replies - 22181 views)

First AP, let me concur that you've got excellent writing skills. I, and the others, would not have read all the way through your piece ...   Wed Jan 17th, 2007 06:44 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Identity Theft Insurance (10 replies - 6527 views)

Sorry. I had one other question. The fact that her daughter asks a question about "Lassie" at the end is starting to feel a little ...   Wed Jan 17th, 2007 02:12 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Identity Theft Insurance (10 replies - 6527 views)

Thanks so much for your comments. I really appreciate them. I agree with the pruning part. I'm working on a revision as we speak. I ...   Wed Jan 17th, 2007 02:10 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Hamelin. A play of sorts (34 replies - 22181 views)

Anyone curious why the author hasn't responded? I am. My thoughts, FWIW: I like the writing, but really disliked the piece. Sorry. Here's why: It was like reading ...   Mon Jan 15th, 2007 09:35 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Identity Theft Insurance (10 replies - 6527 views)

I've been crazy busy just putting out these shorts. This might be included in a night about discoveries. PLEASE. Let me know what you think.                                                           Identity ...   Mon Jan 15th, 2007 08:32 pm

Critique my Play > Say yes to you (5 replies - 4314 views)

Nice Job Robyn! Nice, nice job. I enjoyed the dialogued. Moved well for me. I agree with Luana that that last scene does come out of no ...   Sun Jan 7th, 2007 04:11 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > A Hot Night In Bedrock (4 replies - 4848 views)

Launa, I LOVE this piece. I think it's got great potential. The images alone made me start laughing. A couple of thoughts. You may want to consider ...   Sun Jan 7th, 2007 04:00 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Waiting for a Train (10 replies - 7720 views)

I liked this piece. But I get the feeling it's got greater potential. A couple of things I wasn't sure about: Where were they? Was that ...   Sun Jan 7th, 2007 03:44 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Elvi On a Ledge (8 replies - 5532 views)

Thanks Edd and Launa for your comments and kind words. I guess it's unanimous on the women. Still I wouldn't mind seeing this up with the ...   Wed Jan 3rd, 2007 01:51 pm

Please, introduce yourself ... > newbie here (8 replies - 5301 views)

Welcome aboard. I'm pretty knew myself. I found Paddy's post on suggestions to playwrights and thought it was well worth it and so join. Enjoy and have ...   Wed Jan 3rd, 2007 03:21 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Hes Dead (6 replies - 5055 views)

I think this piece is quite interesting. I get what's being said about the funny to suddenly serious part, but that didn't bother me. I stayed ...   Mon Jan 1st, 2007 03:08 pm

Critique my Play > Balls (7 replies - 5058 views)

Thanks to your replies. I kind of thought that this piece died on the thread. Muncy, I do have a reason for why Vincent comes off ...   Sun Dec 31st, 2006 11:34 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Elvi On a Ledge (8 replies - 5532 views)

Thanks for your comments. Paddy, I wondered about the women and yes, the piece could be done without them. I just thought it might be interesting ...   Sun Dec 31st, 2006 04:02 pm

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Elvi On a Ledge (8 replies - 5532 views)

Thought of this as possibly an evening of short plays on decesions. Let me know what you think. Elvi on a Ledge By E. Ezra Antar                                                                    ...   Thu Dec 28th, 2006 09:07 pm

Critique my Play > MIXED MESSAGES part one (1 reply - 2284 views)

Hi John, I just started reading this. I can't continue at the moment but what I read so far (scene 1) sounds very interesting and makes ...   Tue Dec 5th, 2006 04:10 pm

Please, introduce yourself ... > Hi... very! (4 replies - 3693 views)

Thanks for the welcome, Edd I'm looking forward to participaging... already have. Would love some feedback on my post in Critique my Play if you have chance. Eddie ...   Mon Dec 4th, 2006 08:45 pm

Please, introduce yourself ... > Hi... very! (4 replies - 3693 views)

Hi Y'all, My name is Eddie. I'm a playwright from NYC. Actor in a former life. Gave it up to start a family. Became a programmer. Now, ...   Sun Dec 3rd, 2006 10:53 pm

Critique my Play > Balls (7 replies - 5058 views)

Hi all. I'm new here. I love this site. Fantastic, safe place to caucus with other wrights! This is just the begining of a new piece I'm ...   Sun Dec 3rd, 2006 10:01 pm

Critique my Play > a little soul (17 replies - 11989 views)

I really enjoyed  the piece. It's actually the way I like write. You start out with a strangeness which causes the audience to wonder where this ...   Sun Dec 3rd, 2006 05:04 pm


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