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 Posted: Thu Nov 1st, 2007 11:24 pm
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lostsocks
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Most poems are not forged
with faith or hope or love
They're not born out of ecstasy
Nor muse from up above

'Tis a baser substance
That sees the poems written
It is the subtle breath of boredom
With which this poet's smitten

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 Posted: Fri Nov 2nd, 2007 03:48 pm
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Nice.  I quite liked that one. 

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 Posted: Sat Nov 3rd, 2007 02:35 pm
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:) thank you

It's based on a true story

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