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 Posted: Thu May 27th, 2010 06:42 pm
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lostsocks
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I'm not much of a poet,
To me trees just look like trees
I'll never be a scientist,
To me trees just look like trees
I don't see photosynthesis, or clever similes
Between those lofty branches, nothing else will squeeze

I'm not much of a poet
The sun is just the sun
I'm not much of a scientist
The sun is just the sun
I don't know it's significance, or of it's hydrogen
It shows it's head, I'm out of bed, and when it's gone I'm done.

There's much that I could know
There's much I could intuit
There's much perhaps that I should find
But I seldom do it

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 Posted: Fri May 28th, 2010 12:29 am
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I love it. Intriguing take on the way writers see things.

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