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There were angels, and a bright light.
A choir playing there,
Lots of people queuing
For a tunnel and the stair.

I saw everyone I loved,
And many people more
Some of them were waiting
By their luggage on the floor

A man stood there in uniform
So I asked him what was what
But those were just the clothes he died in
And he didn’t know a lot

Isn’t there a boatman?
I gently tried to say
“Boatman’s kinda busy, kid
When thousands die each day”

So all these waiting people
Where should those people go?
“Haven’t you been told kid?
It’s impossible to know”

So I’m waiting in the after-life
Waiting in a line
No one knows what next
But I guess I’m doing fine.

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