View single post by Moonmi
 Posted: Tue Mar 15th, 2011 08:57 pm
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Joined: Fri Jun 5th, 2009
Location: Illinois USA
Posts: 32
Maybe I'm too trained to think that everything have a nice tidy bow on the end, but I was waiting for the shoe to drop on why he really did this. 

Was it lack of parental approval?

Was it lack of confidence and he created it himself?

Was it just a need to feel good about himself because he didn't get it from anybody else?

It did seem a bit drawn out and the poem did pull me to other works by the poet that I hear in my head when I hear her name.

All that said i like the situation, I like the interaction.

Trim and define character.  A piece of advice I was given long ago, and I hear it every time I finish something.