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 Posted: Mon Aug 21st, 2006 05:34 pm
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playfull



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Hi Boz,

Really like these two. I like the wit of their exchanges and i like their knowing playfulness. I think they have real potential - even sitcom potential?

I do think this piece needs a stronger ending though.........

regards

playfull