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 Posted: Mon Jul 8th, 2013 08:05 pm
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playwright_bo



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Mana: 
The ending was really well done and a powerful moment, however, the beginning was a bit slowed down with exposition dialogue... mostly call and response revealing the Man's story. Its an excellent story that they are revealing, could just be me, but you have fully fleshed out characters and an interesting story that is being shared between them, but I don't know what is at stake or what is keeping the characters in the room until the very very end.