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 Posted: Tue Jul 16th, 2013 07:09 pm
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Whitney

 

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I found it very well written.  I don't know why so many playwrights refuse to name their characters, to flesh them out.  Even if the names aren't referred to, the playwright should know them and each character's background.  You made a point to describe the woman's age and look but only what the man was wearing.