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 Posted: Mon Aug 12th, 2013 09:56 am
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Wendy Onslow

 

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Hello,

I have no complaints with the writing, or what's happening, but I can't say I like either character very much. I realize it's terribly early in the story, and that it's a work-in-progress, but I am struggling with those two male characters, if they're an example of all men (which, I think they probab;y are). I find it strangely depressing (that's not necessarily a bad thing for me).

Wendy