|View single post by michaelthompson|
|Posted: Thu May 14th, 2015 08:59 am||
|I've just completed a rough first draft of a full length play and I'd love some feedback.
It's called No Love.
Here's a logline:
A misanthropic college student obsessed with movies and death deals with the destruction of his family, friends, and romantic relationships by putting himself in the shoes of B movie protagonists, but things start to fall apart even further when he can no longer differentiate reality and fantasy.
Here's a link to earlier versions of the first 2 scenes:
If anyone would like to read the full 107 page first draft, please let me know.
Keep in mind it's still pretty rough, there are some problem areas I have identified and rereading I caught some typos I haven't fixed yet. I would love to get another pair of eyes on this thing so I can get it where it needs to be.
Thanks in advance.
EDIT: Due to responses, here is the link to the full first draft:
Last edited on Thu May 28th, 2015 10:52 am by michaelthompson