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 Posted: Thu May 14th, 2015 08:59 am
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michaelthompson



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Mana: 
I've just completed a rough first draft of a full length play and I'd love some feedback.

It's called No Love.

Here's a logline:

A misanthropic college student obsessed with movies and death deals with the destruction of his family, friends, and romantic relationships by putting himself in the shoes of B movie protagonists, but things start to fall apart even further when he can no longer differentiate reality and fantasy.

Here's a link to earlier versions of the first 2 scenes:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BxdOPvt4UK3JY0RrQ0M2SzV5dmM/view?usp=sharing

If anyone would like to read the full 107 page first draft, please let me know.

Keep in mind it's still pretty rough, there are some problem areas I have identified and rereading I caught some typos I haven't fixed yet. I would love to get another pair of eyes on this thing so I can get it where it needs to be.

Thanks in advance.

EDIT: Due to responses, here is the link to the full first draft:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BxdOPvt4UK3Jdk5YaUdtS1dIcDQ/view?usp=sharing

Last edited on Thu May 28th, 2015 10:52 am by michaelthompson