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 Posted: Mon May 25th, 2015 07:22 am
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RTurco



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Michael Thompson, I read the excerpt and I like it very much. I'm not sure how I feel about the profanity either, though I think it may work if you establish it is a corruption enacted by Joe-- the poisoning of old-style film by contemporary sensibilities. If you do choose to take that route, it's up to you. Really.

I think I'd like to read the rest.