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 Posted: Sat Feb 18th, 2017 05:03 am
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in media res

 

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Welcome to the Forum

Firstly, I would suggest your layout be more readable to the eye.

It is not your play, but the arrangement of your play, that makes it pretty hard to read.

Here is a link from another playwright on the site that makes his play very redable.

I suggest you change your formatting, so the eye can Scan down the page more easily.

Again, Welcome to the forum. And only post the first 10 pages of yoru script.

Best,

IMR