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|Posted: Sat Feb 18th, 2017 05:03 am||
in media res
|Welcome to the Forum
Firstly, I would suggest your layout be more readable to the eye.
It is not your play, but the arrangement of your play, that makes it pretty hard to read.
Here is a link from another playwright on the site that makes his play very redable.
I suggest you change your formatting, so the eye can Scan down the page more easily.
Again, Welcome to the forum. And only post the first 10 pages of yoru script.