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 Posted: Sat Aug 26th, 2017 11:45 pm
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Red_Rose

 

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This is my first script and I would appreciate any sort of feedback on it. I'm still deciding if I should extend it into a one act or just end it a few lines back.

Last edited on Sun Aug 27th, 2017 06:33 pm by Red_Rose