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 Posted: Sat Oct 7th, 2006 06:37 pm
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Edd



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Swann,

As a one-act I think it is complete.  The brilliantly written characters carry it.  I'd like to see it as a full-length, however--filled with twists and complications.  These are some of the best written characters I've seen (especially of late).

I cannot begin to tell you how wonderfully I enjoyed reading your dialogue and being in the company of a certain class and intelligence.  I more often than not read your lines twice.  Once for the sense and once so I could act them out with silent lips moving.  Very delicious and sharp.

I also broke my ten page reading limit rule.

What did you write today?