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 Posted: Wed Oct 11th, 2006 06:12 pm
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alan0198



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Mana: 
agree with Edd:  want more.  Sharply distinguished characters, and real flow to the dialogue.  The playing with each other that both masks and reveals real faultlines is particularly well done--this could be expanded and explored at greater length, the manueverings that a couple has to do to keep a partnership afloat.  And I want to meet Leo.