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If i could trade my grumpy cynicism for poetic talent I would... But until then, I hope you enjoy this offering.
As always, criticisms, pointy sticks and comments are more than welcome.


Shopping

Buy Zen and get the Buddha free
Half-price heaven with a lifetime guarantee

Sometimes five quid sometimes more
Christ delivered to your door

Salvation is the new shampoo
It cleanses sin and dandruff too.

It’s Pick and mix (every man for himself)
Lets raid the store and clear the shelf

Heaven’s never looked so great, I’m knocking at its door
But I’ve sold my soul to Argos – Didn’t need it anymore

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No pointy sticks!  Laughing and loving it! x

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:)
Always glad to raise a smile, thanks for the kind words

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Hehe, love it. [:



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