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 Posted: Sun Oct 20th, 2019 11:37 am
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David R. Garland
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I started writing this just over three years ago, but health problems forced me to abandon it. I lost access to my old account here, and to the e-mail that it was associated with, so I was forced to create a new one. Anyway, I was busy clearing out an old hard drive when I happened upon this, my first attempt at a play, and to be honest, my first and only attempt at any serious writing at all. I have played around with it for the past week, and I am honestly not sure what to make of it. I would truly appreciate any and all feedback that you could offer me. Brutally honest is fine, I wonder if it is worth finishing, or should I just start fresh with a new idea. Also, do you see any potential in my writing or should I take up golf or something?
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Thanks in advance,
David
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 Posted: Wed Oct 23rd, 2019 08:05 am
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David R. Garland
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I have decided to eighty-six this, as the passage of time has seemed to robbed me of the emotional connection to the characters. I am assuming, that the lack of commentary on it reflects it's poor state. As I said earlier this was my first attempt ant any serious writing undertaking during illness, and as such I see considerable room for improvement. Thank you all for the time and consideration you spent on this drivel.

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