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 Posted: Mon Jan 4th, 2021 11:19 pm
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The alert came with
updated numbers
I studied the map
and scrolled down
the numbers
of each county

Your county didn't have any
free of the plague
how happy you
would have been
had you been around

I can picture you still
in your study
writing about Jane
on a cold
snowy morning
wishing she was there
to brew your coffee

Now you are free
both of you
but I am here
waiting for a poem
from either of you

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how happy you
would have been
had you been around

how happy you
would have been
had you been around


Now you are free
both of you
but I am here
waiting for a poem
from either of you


Loved this. Grabbed me in a caress. Read it about 10 times.

IMR

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