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Critique my Play > REFLECTING LENS (9 replies - 12535 views)

awesome! ...   Fri Jul 29th, 2016 08:31 pm

Critique my Play > Clytemnestra (6 replies - 7572 views)

Thank you for the feedback, Alan. Glad that the triple "chorus" is reading in some way. ...   Sat Sep 24th, 2011 10:47 pm

Critique my Play > Clytemnestra (6 replies - 7572 views)

Hello again, friend. Appreciate it. ...   Wed Aug 17th, 2011 04:43 am

Question & Answer > Are we too smart? (14 replies - 12875 views)

Love it, Edd. I wanted to post of your FB wall the other day that I came across an old post of yours discussing the ...   Wed Aug 17th, 2011 04:36 am

Critique my Play > Clytemnestra (6 replies - 7572 views)

:: slowly erasing:: bu___ ...   Wed Aug 17th, 2011 04:11 am

Question & Answer > The Kinds Speech (2 replies - 4447 views)

And the play is headed to BWAY this year. ...   Mon Aug 15th, 2011 12:05 am

Question & Answer > Are we too smart? (14 replies - 12875 views)

PADDY!!! So glad I came across this thread. I have often wondered the same thing. As a theatre artist who will admit to being an actor first ...   Sun Aug 14th, 2011 11:39 pm

Critique my Play > Hatshepsut, Daughter of Thebes---1-10 (9 replies - 10978 views)

Not sure if anyone else knew this, but I came across Kurt's obituary a few weeks ago. It appears that he passed in '10. Was ...   Sun Aug 14th, 2011 10:21 pm

Please, introduce yourself ... > I'm Baaaaack..... (8 replies - 8784 views)

Yay, Proboscisbunny is back! I remember reading posts of yours many moons back. I, too, have recently returned to trolling the forum. It's like ...   Sun Aug 14th, 2011 07:55 am

Critique my Play > Clytemnestra (6 replies - 7572 views)

I guess I should have been more specific in what I'm hoping to gain in terms of feedback from the Forum. This is a project ...   Sat Aug 13th, 2011 09:12 pm

Come and See my Play > 25th production of 3 Guys opens in San Francisco (5 replies - 9649 views)

SO thrilled for you, Ed. Wish I was going to be in the area, I'd go see it, too! ...   Sat Aug 13th, 2011 08:51 pm

Critique my Play > Clytemnestra (6 replies - 7572 views)

HEY ALL... This play is hopefully moving towards production at the end of the year. It's undergoing a complete retooling. This scene is the first. ...   Thu Aug 11th, 2011 05:32 pm

Critique my Play > The new reworked first scene of CLYTEMNESTRA (3 replies - 4865 views)

Actually replied to your message a few mins back. Check your box. ...   Sun Nov 15th, 2009 03:05 pm

Critique my Play > The new reworked first scene of CLYTEMNESTRA (3 replies - 4865 views)

she won't bite. Sit a spell. Haha. ...   Sun Nov 15th, 2009 02:06 pm

Critique my Play > The new reworked first scene of CLYTEMNESTRA (3 replies - 4865 views)

Edited 11.30.09 ...   Sat Nov 14th, 2009 11:21 pm

Critique my Play > Hatshepsut, Daughter of Thebes---1-10 (9 replies - 10978 views)

Kurt-- Got it... Difficult feats are the best kind. I was merely offering that as an actor (which is what I am first) and a ...   Sat Nov 14th, 2009 11:02 pm

Critique my Play > Dead Writes (3 replies - 4823 views)

How inventive. The angel of death and the unsuspecting victim. I like it. ...   Sat Nov 14th, 2009 02:01 pm

Critique my Play > Hatshepsut, Daughter of Thebes---1-10 (9 replies - 10978 views)

Hey Kurt... Well first let me commend you on such an ambitious undertaking. Writing a play that sheds light on ancient historical figures is always ...   Sat Nov 14th, 2009 01:34 pm

Critique my Play > Hatshepsut, Daughter of Thebes---1-10 (9 replies - 10978 views)

HAHA! Kurt, I love the updated status. I haven't ventured onto the site for a couple of weeks but know what it's like when a post ...   Fri Nov 13th, 2009 04:42 pm

Critique my Play > Untitled New Play (9 replies - 8898 views)

Haha... I copied your response to respond to it... Didn't catch the signature, but I will leave it there. WE'RE THE SAME PERSON!!!! AHHHHH! ...   Tue Oct 13th, 2009 10:35 pm

Critique my Play > Untitled New Play (9 replies - 8898 views)

in media, Glad you likey. I'm really having a good time with this play. Only a scene in and it's FUN. I think Clytemnestra became serious ...   Tue Oct 13th, 2009 09:32 pm

Critique my Play > Untitled New Play (9 replies - 8898 views)

Edd, Thanks for the kind words. I think we all know at least one Stephanie. I'm finding some real joy in writing her. Play is brand spanking new. ...   Sun Oct 11th, 2009 02:17 am

Critique my Play > Untitled New Play (9 replies - 8898 views)

Anyone? Any and all feedback will be much appreciated. ...   Sat Oct 10th, 2009 04:39 am

Critique my Play > Untitled New Play (9 replies - 8898 views)

Taken down by playwright 10/18/09. If you'd like to give it a gander, send me a PM. Corerro ...   Fri Oct 9th, 2009 02:32 am

Critique my Play > REFLECTING LENS (9 replies - 12535 views)

What a nice little breath of life. I was touched by the "stay away from bad people".... Simple, but really the best advice someone could ...   Thu Oct 1st, 2009 06:36 pm

Critique my Play > new one "The Rocket's Red Glare" (7 replies - 7034 views)

Interesting.... I too am missing the stakes throughout most of this. There are some moments of tension that the jokes sort of band-aid but I'm ...   Thu Apr 17th, 2008 01:54 am

Synopses and Cover Letters > Query Letter (7 replies - 16937 views)

Definitely took your feedback on and wanted to just drop you a thanks since I don't think I'd remembered to do it before. I hope the ...   Sun Apr 13th, 2008 02:28 am

Synopses and Cover Letters > Query Letter (7 replies - 16937 views)

Thank you so very much, .... I must actually thank you twice: 1) for the website advice that I found on your site and 2) ...   Thu Apr 3rd, 2008 05:19 am

Critique my Play > On Thin Ice (10 replies - 10035 views)

Boring? No, I wouldn't say so. There are some moments that become convoluted because of an extra word or two, but there's an interesting vulnerability ...   Wed Apr 2nd, 2008 05:45 pm

Synopses and Cover Letters > Query Letter (7 replies - 16937 views)

Been working on this a few days... a second pair of eyes or 200 would be great. Dear Lit Manager,     Thrust suddenly into the seat of power, ...   Wed Apr 2nd, 2008 04:39 pm

Synopses and Cover Letters > New Synopsis (0 replies - 8010 views)

For a good while I thought I had worked out a great, short synop for my place Clytemnestra, but after working with a dramaturg for ...   Mon Mar 31st, 2008 04:35 pm

Critique my Play > Clytemnestra (13 replies - 12403 views)

Sweet! I greatly appreciate the feedback. I have found that the wave of creating a new classic "vernacular" to be a difficult one. One of ...   Wed Mar 26th, 2008 06:00 pm

Critique my Play > Clytemnestra (13 replies - 12403 views)

I hadn't heard of it, MaryAlice, but thank you. I will check them out! *** For some reason, I never received the email saying you'd ...   Wed Mar 26th, 2008 05:39 pm

Critique my Play > Clytemnestra (13 replies - 12403 views)

I thank you.... I was/continue to be fully open to all feedback on it, just wasn't clear which sections I should zoom in on. I ...   Sun Mar 9th, 2008 01:59 am

Critique my Play > Clytemnestra (13 replies - 12403 views)

I would love to know specifically what fell into either category for you.   ...   Sat Mar 8th, 2008 08:08 pm

Critique my Play > Clytemnestra (13 replies - 12403 views)

Did you see I pasted it, Mary? ...   Wed Mar 5th, 2008 06:46 am

Critique my Play > Clytemnestra (13 replies - 12403 views)

.... CEA..... (I will soon post the final final draft of this scene. ...   Tue Mar 4th, 2008 11:38 pm

Critique my Play > Walking Bonsai (7 replies - 5691 views)

Interesting. I like this. It could well be longer but at the same time, there's something that just pops with it being short. My two ...   Sun Mar 2nd, 2008 08:33 pm

Critique my Play > two sketches (5 replies - 5640 views)

I think the first grabbed my attention more than the second. There is a similarity to the format of questions in both pieces, but the ...   Tue Feb 26th, 2008 05:53 am

Reviews and Critiques > There Will Be Blood (5 replies - 6675 views)

I also saw "No Country" and was really disturbed by it. It's inspiring to see what happens when you break the mold. There was somethng ...   Sat Feb 23rd, 2008 08:32 pm

Reviews and Critiques > Private Lives by Noel Coward (5 replies - 8543 views)

As some of you know, I'm in my second year of a 3yr MFA program in Acting, and in this semester we're working in comedy ...   Sat Feb 23rd, 2008 08:20 pm

Reviews and Critiques > There Will Be Blood (5 replies - 6675 views)

Yes, I agree wholeheartedly. Both the film and Mr. Lewis left lasting impressions. You don't see acting like this often. It was almost as if ...   Sat Feb 23rd, 2008 08:17 pm

Critique my Play > Smoking the Bees - critique me... (16 replies - 13506 views)

Impressive. I think the story shifts oddly when the Hunting man comes in from nowhere and is never heard from again... The "Rosa Parks" was ...   Thu Oct 25th, 2007 01:18 am

Critique my Play > Neck Brace Man (5 replies - 6087 views)

Unfortunately, you lost me at "But I was from McAllen, Texas." I agree with Leon that the exposition comes in heavy right from the start, ...   Sun Aug 19th, 2007 06:42 am

Critique my Play > Intro to a thriller (6 replies - 6431 views)

I really dont know what to tell you here.. I wanted one reason, just one reason to care about any of the people you've got ...   Thu Aug 9th, 2007 07:08 am

Critique my Play > Transmitting Curiosity (11 replies - 11029 views)

fady, I think concepts are amazing in theory, but if they don't READ, they're dead concepts. I can appreciate that you're sort of defending/explaining your ideas ...   Tue Jul 31st, 2007 10:12 pm

Critique my Play > Transmitting Curiosity (11 replies - 11029 views)

Muncy, I could not possibly agree more... For me it will be a dead horse saying it again but as an actor, the first question I'm ...   Fri Jul 27th, 2007 12:45 pm

Reviews and Critiques > The Lion in Winter (3 replies - 5575 views)

As I enter my last week in a production of this play I wonder what other playwrights think of this dusty gem. When I first ...   Fri Jul 20th, 2007 12:49 am

Critique my Play > Quittin' Time (10 replies - 9339 views)

Brett, I like the premise of the piece quite a bit... It's sorta Demi Moore/Patrick Swayze for the new millinieum...  As a playwright, I just love ...   Thu Jul 19th, 2007 04:55 pm

Collaborators > Screenplay writer collaborator (1 reply - 5616 views)

I'm not looking to collaborate but I wanted to acknowledge what can only be called big cahunas to claim your play is "more important" than ...   Wed Jul 18th, 2007 09:25 pm


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