Critique my Play > El Jefe (The Chief) (2 replies - 5080 views)
Edd,
I'm glad I hit your funny cord with those few words. As you can see, I'm with you on whatever anything means. I mean it ... Mon Dec 4th, 2006 02:26 am Critique my Play > El Jefe (The Chief) (2 replies - 5080 views)
I'm not too sure where I want to go with this piece. I know I'm making a political statement of some sort. However, I need ... Thu Nov 30th, 2006 11:09 pm Work-in-Progress > Playwriting Stuff (33 replies - 53745 views)
Good advice, Paddy. This reaffirms what playwriting is all about. ... Fri Nov 17th, 2006 02:24 am The Playwrights' Gym - Re-writes > Indifference (4 replies - 12464 views)
Years ago, I knew this teacher who worked in a junior high school in an impoverished area in New York City called the Lower East Side. ... Wed Aug 30th, 2006 01:19 pm The Playwrights' Gym - Re-writes > Indifference (4 replies - 12464 views)
With much thanks to the group who gave me more insight in revising this piece, below you'll see my second draft.
At rise: JAKE and ... Tue Aug 29th, 2006 02:40 am Critique my Play > Indifference (4 replies - 7631 views)
At rise: A male and female are in the busy section of downtown holding up signs. One sign reads “PROTEST” while the other one reads ... Sun Aug 27th, 2006 03:06 pm Critique my Play > Last Stop (2 replies - 5750 views)
Thanks a lot, Edd. I wanted to remove it as soon as I saw how convoluted it appeared on the post. I will try to get ... Sat Aug 26th, 2006 04:47 pm Critique my Play > Last Stop (2 replies - 5750 views)
... Sat Aug 26th, 2006 02:13 pm Work-in-Progress > Survey (17 replies - 23773 views)
I've been fortunate over the years to have some of my plays professionally produced. I find most of my mileage comes from writing short plays ... Thu Aug 17th, 2006 08:48 pm Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Poetry (0 replies - 3691 views)
Like to get feedback on this poem of mine. Thanks.
IMAGES AREN’T REAL
although they try to be
COPIES ARE A DOZEN
yet not one can be for real
THE ... Wed Aug 16th, 2006 11:36 pm |