The Playwrights Forum Home 
The Playwrights Forum > JustGoWithIt

click here for details

Profile Topics Posts
Posts by JustGoWithIt
75 postsShowing posts 1-50 of 75

Critique my Play > In the Valley of the Dying Stars (7 replies - 8154 views)

The concept is very original - the main character echoed my thoughts in that this not the Hell we're always being taught about. I really ...   Tue Dec 11th, 2012 03:25 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Untitled(Suggestions welcome) (2 replies - 4116 views)

This has a lot of potential, and a lot of the imagery you used really stuck with me. If you could tighten some verses up ...   Sun Dec 9th, 2012 04:46 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > How Not to Speed Up Time (1 reply - 3334 views)

Count down from 81. Reunite the celebration songs for the day you reach zero. Find their names first. Find the weavers of stories of what they ...   Sun Dec 9th, 2012 04:38 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > The Search (7 replies - 7895 views)

A lot of great imagery in this poem (kissing was trilling, the stillness of my heart, etc.) I echo a lot of people here by ...   Sun Dec 9th, 2012 04:30 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > I Watch Them (1 reply - 3090 views)

Last verse really caught me off guard there. But I suppose that was exactly its intent. Good read. ...   Wed Jul 4th, 2012 12:42 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > to be in the world (1 reply - 3383 views)

The great selection of detail is what really dragged me into this. ...   Sun May 13th, 2012 03:41 pm

Work-in-Progress > Tough Time (11 replies - 15543 views)

Roy Peter Clark once said that when faced with writer's block, "Turn procrastination into rehersal." In other words, try and come up with stuff in ...   Wed Feb 22nd, 2012 01:46 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Arlington (0 replies - 2788 views)

It was towards the end of May, I think when two hundred of our tired feet stopped at the cemetery. You could still make out a Monument, a ...   Wed Feb 15th, 2012 01:17 am

Critique my Play > The Picture Kept Will Remind Me (5 replies - 8234 views)

I like the ideas you're presenting here, but...and perhaps this is because of the blank-verse style here or perhaps the characters have a more sophisticated ...   Mon Jan 30th, 2012 02:11 am

Critique my Play > Carpe Diem: The Musical (4 replies - 6096 views)

Saw some of the videos. The music was catchy, and I laughed quite a bit. Great work, sir. How long has this been in the ...   Thu Jan 19th, 2012 01:25 am

Critique my Play > Dark Comedy (6 replies - 7862 views)

My thoughts... - Exposition about the proposal was very beautifully (and by beautifully I mean subtlely) worked in. The exposition about the museum, however, I didn't ...   Fri Jan 6th, 2012 01:23 am

Critique my Play > The Cheater - Short Play (2 replies - 4061 views)

I'm a high school playwright too (still editing my first full-length) but here are my thoughts. - For one, the premise hooked me and kept me ...   Tue Nov 8th, 2011 02:44 am

Please, introduce yourself ... > Good Morning from Maine (4 replies - 5419 views)

Maine? Oh, you mean Stephen-King-Land. :P That aside, welcome aboard. Good to have you. ...   Sun Oct 30th, 2011 11:24 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Go Low (0 replies - 2365 views)

Go low. It was not all you could have done when it came to what you were born to do, though some were wondering where you went. Not once ...   Fri Oct 21st, 2011 03:57 am

Take the Stage > Interesting (shall we say) Scalzi article on young writers (2 replies - 5476 views)

Apologize for the bump, but I ended up finding a similar one. Granted, it's about SCREENWRITING, but that's beside the point. I was particularly (and severely) ...   Fri Oct 14th, 2011 03:27 am

Reviews and Critiques > "The Importance of Being Earnest" in HD (2 replies - 7603 views)

Excellent news to hear, Louisep. I specifically remember when that show was playing at my local theatre a few years ago. Turning down the offer to ...   Mon Aug 22nd, 2011 03:19 am

Take the Stage > Interesting (shall we say) Scalzi article on young writers (2 replies - 5476 views) I read that whole thing. And, well, being a young playwright myself, one who always strove to write truly good works as opposed to stuff ...   Mon Aug 22nd, 2011 03:01 am

Critique my Play > The Benefits Of Health Insurance (1 reply - 3691 views)

First off, loved the double entendre in the title. Second, this piece only has one character, but he seems very well developed in his comedically ...   Sun Aug 7th, 2011 02:08 am

Question & Answer > Question about themes in your plays... (8 replies - 9552 views)

Francisco F. wrote: Speaking of themes do you work w/any particular themes in your work even if its not intentional? I think depending on our individual ...   Sun Jul 24th, 2011 05:29 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Lives (1 reply - 3058 views)

OH MY GOSH can I relate to this. ...   Sat May 28th, 2011 12:59 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > So Simple (for Harmon Killebrew) (6 replies - 7457 views)

Accidental double post. Ignore plz. :/ ...   Sun May 22nd, 2011 06:09 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > So Simple (for Harmon Killebrew) (6 replies - 7457 views)

Timmy, the question, sadly, should be "who WAS Dale Earnhardt". Here's some info on him. ...   Sun May 22nd, 2011 06:09 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > So Simple (for Harmon Killebrew) (6 replies - 7457 views)

Amazing as always. The part about mountains I personally believe comes from the fact that baseball wasn't as corrupted by things like money and steroids ...   Sat May 21st, 2011 03:14 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Still Life (Red Hands) (4 replies - 5101 views)

Who was Lydia Small anyway? The poem was great, BTW. ...   Tue May 17th, 2011 09:30 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Less than a Fling (2 replies - 3674 views)

I liked it. The rhyme scheme jumped out at you as opposed to being mundane and perfectly rythmic, which in a way helped the atmosphere ...   Sat May 14th, 2011 10:40 pm

Take the Stage > Where does/did your first play take place? (19 replies - 18690 views)

darkeithlofton elaborated on this in the After-Live thread and I thought it was interesting. Just say what the setting of your first play is. (I'm ...   Wed Apr 27th, 2011 02:38 am

Take the Stage > Last First Line (26 replies - 24403 views)

Might as well, since this time I actually finished it... GO WITH IT: Patrick: After that, I just remember thinking how lucky I was that I got ...   Wed Apr 27th, 2011 02:32 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Unmade (1 reply - 2872 views)

Reminds me of a quote I once read that resonated with me...I can't recall who said it, it must have been a famous went ...   Sun Apr 24th, 2011 12:57 am

Critique my Play > Mixed Singles Act One (2 replies - 4190 views)

The comedy in this was very well thought out (I just had to chuckle at the part about which half was responsible), and the stereotypes ...   Sat Apr 23rd, 2011 11:18 pm

Take the Stage > The world's most rejected playwright (6 replies - 7382 views)

99.57 percent chance of rejection? Oh my. ...   Sun Apr 10th, 2011 01:21 am

Question & Answer > Flashbacks (4 replies - 10378 views)

I personally find flashbacks to be more feasible either as their own scene or at the beginning of a scene, not only for technical reasons ...   Sat Apr 9th, 2011 04:03 pm

Question & Answer > Examples needed (8 replies - 8954 views)

OMG. I thought you meant The Room as in the horrible movie called The Room. So glad that wasn't the case. Anyhow, in response to your ...   Sat Mar 26th, 2011 07:25 pm

Success Stories > "Babes" going to Romania (3 replies - 9116 views)

Congrats on this accomplishment. Hope everyone enjoys the play. ...   Tue Mar 15th, 2011 04:18 am

Work-in-Progress > Needing some perspective (10 replies - 15706 views)

Alan wrote: Thanks, JustGo.  I appreciate you taking the time.  It's good to know the play pulled you in, but I can understand your sense that ...   Mon Mar 14th, 2011 11:09 pm

Work-in-Progress > Needing some perspective (10 replies - 15706 views)

This play really pulled me in, and if you consider that I'm supposed to be working on something now, you can understand how interested I ...   Mon Mar 14th, 2011 03:28 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > A Prelude (9 replies - 9616 views)

You should seriously publish a book of all these poems. ...   Wed Mar 9th, 2011 08:33 pm

Please, introduce yourself ... > Hello! (3 replies - 6380 views)

Welcome. I'd love to see your work. ...   Tue Mar 8th, 2011 02:01 am

Critique my Play > Another scene (3 replies - 5085 views)

Thanks for the feedback, QuixotesGhost...but I wrote this when I knew literally nothing about playwriting. Looking back, I'm kind of ashamed of it. It's not ...   Fri Feb 25th, 2011 07:34 pm

Critique my Play > The Furnishings of Good and Evil (10 replies - 12694 views)

The way you presented God in this piece was very, very funny, but it might anger some hardcore Christians (i.e. the ones who call Jesus' ...   Thu Feb 24th, 2011 04:13 am

Critique my Play > GO WITH IT - Act I, Scene 2 (0 replies - 2837 views)

...   Wed Feb 2nd, 2011 11:09 pm

Critique my Play > The first scene of GO WITH IT (7 replies - 10865 views)

Revised this for the umpteen billionth time so that it's a little more gripping in terms of the plot. ...   Sat Jan 29th, 2011 06:35 am

Critique my Play > The first scene of GO WITH IT (7 replies - 10865 views)

Jeccasdad...I probably should have mentioned that this is the first full-length I've EVER written. I probably have the least experience of any member here. The ...   Fri Jan 21st, 2011 02:54 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Viewpoints (1 reply - 3325 views)

Two tall men of different faiths Went strolling one fine evening. As their paths crossed, each quickly knew The other’s diverse leanings. “He doesn’t know how to live well,” Thought ...   Sat Jan 15th, 2011 02:45 am

Announcements > i gots me an invite! (7 replies - 7915 views)

Congratulations, Spiny. Enjoy the show. ...   Mon Jan 10th, 2011 11:12 pm

Critique my Play > The first scene of GO WITH IT (7 replies - 10865 views)

I've merged what was the second scene into this one to try and remove some of the "not caring". Go have a looksee. Also, if ...   Wed Jan 5th, 2011 01:16 am

Please, introduce yourself ... > Hello from out here (2 replies - 4901 views)

Welcome aboard! ...   Wed Dec 15th, 2010 03:50 am

Critique my Play > The first scene of GO WITH IT (7 replies - 10865 views)

Thanks for your reply. I have modified this scene qute a bit since I first posted it, actually, and if you'd like I'll post the ...   Wed Dec 15th, 2010 03:34 am

Critique my Play > Live and Breathe (2 replies - 4506 views)

The premise/plot of the play was excellent and quite creative. Believe me, I read the opening blurb under the title and I thought "Holy cow, ...   Sun Dec 5th, 2010 05:03 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > The Alpha Couple (2 replies - 7743 views)

First of all, I should say that I managed to read this whole thing. It really grabbed my attention and you should be proud of ...   Fri Dec 3rd, 2010 10:34 pm

Critique my Play > ALIENS (6 replies - 7989 views)

As someone who's read about the "reptilian-shapeshifter" conspiracy theories, I could very much relate to this piece. But that aside, I took it as less ...   Sun Nov 28th, 2010 12:36 am

 Current time is 12:52 pm
   1  2  Next Page Last Page

UltraBB 1.17 Copyright © 2007-2011 Data 1 Systems
Page processed in 0.1958 seconds (4% database + 96% PHP). 10 queries executed.