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Critique my Play > First Draft - 10 Minute Play (11 replies - 14632 views)

Hello, I have a slight problem with this play; it is how the women are represented. I don't like the male fantasy cliché that a ...   Wed Mar 23rd, 2016 06:33 pm

Work-in-Progress > Scene Changes (4 replies - 8905 views)

I say, go with your instinct. I don't see why you can't simply have everyone enter and exit when you want. It is a play, ...   Tue Sep 17th, 2013 09:28 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > In search of a punchline! (14 replies - 20462 views)

I think the best one is from Alan. (The one about the soliloquies). Wendy ...   Sat Sep 7th, 2013 10:41 am

Critique my Play > Hope (5 replies - 7912 views)

Hello Trevor, now, I know this play is called Hope, but I take that to be ironic. It's open- ended, so I suppose anyone can go ...   Fri Sep 6th, 2013 10:04 am

Critique my Play > Horse Play (working title) (5 replies - 8012 views)

Hello IMS, thank you for your comments. I don't always reply to people immediately bcause I don't actually own a computer, I use the one at ...   Fri Sep 6th, 2013 09:50 am

Critique my Play > Hope (5 replies - 7912 views)

Hello, Trevor, is this going to be about two people fighting their way out of a totalitarian state, or is it going somewhere completely different? I ...   Sat Aug 31st, 2013 10:49 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > On a Star (3 replies - 4759 views)

I'm very fond of the last two lines in particular. It's a large sentiment in a tiny poem. I don't know that it's shaped like ...   Sat Aug 17th, 2013 11:15 am

Critique my Play > FLORA - a new musical entertainment (1 reply - 5835 views)

I've taken a good look at this. You've certainly gone for the feel of the 1930s musicals, at least, that's how it feels to me, ...   Wed Aug 14th, 2013 09:55 am

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > Eurydice and Hades (3 replies - 5348 views)

You should read a poem by EE Cummings (which I think the first line is, "Next of course to god america i", it's quite specific, ...   Wed Aug 14th, 2013 09:41 am

Critique my Play > Horse Play (working title) (5 replies - 8012 views)

Hello to both of you, Swann 1719 and Kato.   I am slightly surprized anyone knew who CB Fry was, but I have only stolen his name, ...   Wed Aug 14th, 2013 09:31 am

Collaborators > Newbie to the Genre - Needing a Partner (8 replies - 10845 views)

Hello, I think the best way to do anything is just to throw yourself in. No one else really knows how to do it either. If ...   Mon Aug 12th, 2013 10:01 am

Critique my Play > Damn Whistle (1 reply - 4044 views)

Hello, I have no complaints with the writing, or what's happening, but I can't say I like either character very much. I realize it's terribly early ...   Mon Aug 12th, 2013 09:56 am

Critique my Play > The Bench in the Park (5 replies - 7884 views)

I take this to be about the pointlessness of life. No one knows when they're going to die, or how, or sometimes why. But it's ...   Sat Aug 10th, 2013 12:26 pm

Critique my Play > Horse Play (working title) (5 replies - 8012 views)

This is very much in the early stages (one character doesn't even have a name, so I've simply called him Man, or he might later ...   Sat Aug 10th, 2013 12:16 pm

Work-in-Progress > Submitting a play (17 replies - 35011 views)

This is very helpful (I don't mean that to sound sarcastic), it really is very helpful. Wendy ...   Sat Aug 10th, 2013 11:41 am

Critique my Play > Persephone (3 replies - 6046 views)

I think everything's fine, but I also think it would benefit from a different rhyme scheme once Hades arrives. ...   Sat Aug 10th, 2013 11:25 am

Work-in-Progress > Submitting a play (17 replies - 35011 views)

Well, this has been an eye-opener to me. I had no idea it would be all right to send to several theatres.Is this protocol accepted ...   Thu Aug 1st, 2013 05:12 pm

Please, introduce yourself ... > Hey Playwrights Forum (9 replies - 12583 views)

Hello, it may be me, but I have found things a little dead on this forum. I haven't posted my work on here yet, and I'm ...   Thu Aug 1st, 2013 04:51 pm

Critique my Play > Sea Turtle (3 replies - 6477 views)

I don't mind that seems rather passive, it feels rather right for his character. I think he knows he isn't in control of anything, the ...   Fri Jul 5th, 2013 09:14 am

Work-in-Progress > How do you know how long to make your first play??? (6 replies - 11316 views)

I think the best thing to do is read and look at other plays. There will be ones that appeal to you. In the end ...   Wed Jul 3rd, 2013 09:48 am

The Playwrights' Gym - Feedback > Another Great Moment in History (5 replies - 11029 views)

I like this. It's snappy and vivid at the same time. ...   Tue Jul 2nd, 2013 09:48 am

Critique my Play > Flowers in a Firestorm (4 replies - 7131 views)

I don't understand saying the transvestite character is more of a woman than most women.  How do you define what a woman is? ...   Wed Jun 12th, 2013 09:39 am

Critique my Play > My Pal Hennie (Does my narrator work?) (19 replies - 26472 views)

I think Solly, as the narrator, works very well. It gives us those moments to reflect after any action. It also allows us to get ...   Fri Jun 7th, 2013 10:29 am

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