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Critique my Play > Gone in a Breeze - sketch comedy (2 replies - 6033 views)

You're absolutely right about it. I've tried to rework it several times and each time it gets crappier.  It might be one simply destined for the ...   Tue Feb 19th, 2008 06:01 am

Critique my Play > Gone in a Breeze - sketch comedy (2 replies - 6033 views)

Attention Deficit Classics Presents The Second Most Overrated Film of All-Time in just under 15 minutes 2006 Brett Fauver ...   Fri Jul 27th, 2007 05:32 am

Critique my Play > Critique my adaptation of Beauty and the Beast please (0 replies - 3587 views)

Beauty and the Beast A play in two acts Draft 2-14-06 By Brett Fauver Adapted from the story by Marie Le Prince De Beaumont AT RISE: FOG and shadows.  Voices ...   Wed Jul 25th, 2007 03:42 am

Critique my Play > The Big Wer Wer Wedding (14 replies - 17599 views)

Poet wrote: Okay - here's another. Thanks to Edd and his comps, I'm seriously thinking of writing an entire volume of comedic 10 minuters, all ...   Thu Jul 19th, 2007 10:59 pm

Critique my Play > My Spam Has a Worm (9 replies - 10761 views)

leon wrote: brett, this is so funny!   and i feel bad that no one is reading your plays.  guess everyone is off at the submission ...   Thu Jul 19th, 2007 10:55 pm

Critique my Play > My Spam Has a Worm (9 replies - 10761 views)

timmy wrote: brett: i'm a Mac man from way back. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Having the Mac as part of the play is brilliant. Please...please ...   Thu Jul 19th, 2007 10:54 pm

Critique my Play > My Spam Has a Worm (9 replies - 10761 views)

*elana* wrote: Glad to help out, Brett! I'm eager to hear how the readings go, as well as any revisions (if you choose to ...   Thu Jul 19th, 2007 10:52 pm

Critique my Play > Quittin' Time (10 replies - 13217 views)

muncy wrote: I agree with most of the things that have been said except that I didn't get it was about death until it was ...   Thu Jul 19th, 2007 10:51 pm

Critique my Play > Quittin' Time (10 replies - 13217 views)

Corerro wrote: Brett, I like the premise of the piece quite a bit... It's sorta Demi Moore/Patrick Swayze for the new millinieum...  As a playwright, I ...   Thu Jul 19th, 2007 10:48 pm

Critique my Play > Quittin' Time (10 replies - 13217 views)

Agreed.  It is cut. in media res wrote: After reading Shanahan's comment, I would even cut: "Why did you have to die? It's unfair" Too cliche'. We ...   Thu Jul 19th, 2007 10:43 pm

Critique my Play > Quittin' Time (10 replies - 13217 views)

Shanahan wrote: I can't say exactly how, but the fact that someone's dead is telegraphed from the start. I was only a few lines into ...   Thu Jul 19th, 2007 10:43 pm

Critique my Play > Quittin' Time (10 replies - 13217 views)

in media res wrote: Old story done very well. The actors would have a good time doing this. Could be any age, even if they are ...   Thu Jul 19th, 2007 10:40 pm

Critique my Play > Quittin' Time (10 replies - 13217 views)

Don't want to give too much background, but it is part of a collection (which includes Spam has a Worm, The Great Akua, Psychic Friends) ...   Thu Jul 19th, 2007 01:36 pm

Critique my Play > My Spam Has a Worm (9 replies - 10761 views)

Elana, Thank you for the critique.  I think you're right.  I'm going to try to have a reading of this soon so I can hear it, ...   Thu Nov 9th, 2006 02:01 am

Critique my Play > My Spam Has a Worm (9 replies - 10761 views)

Thanks for the positive response!  It's nice to have feedback. ...   Thu Nov 9th, 2006 01:59 am

Critique my Play > Praying to a White Horse (5 replies - 7666 views)

That's quite a task.  I don't think I could tackle something like that.  Good luck with it! ...   Wed Nov 8th, 2006 07:04 pm

Critique my Play > Praying to a White Horse (5 replies - 7666 views)

A little hard to follow at times, but I can be frightfully daft. However, I like the wordplay and punnage (punnage is a word, right?). I've used ...   Wed Nov 8th, 2006 06:30 pm

Critique my Play > The Big Wer Wer Wedding (14 replies - 17599 views)

I think it's fantastic!  I found myself laughing out loud on several of the lines. I don't know about the overblown Richard mock-stuttering at the end.  ...   Wed Nov 8th, 2006 06:27 pm

Critique my Play > Furies Fell (0 replies - 3961 views)

Okay, I wrote the original version in 1994 as a full-length.  In 1996 I was dissatisfied and rewrote it as a one-act play.  I had ...   Mon Oct 30th, 2006 02:12 pm

Critique my Play > My Spam Has a Worm (9 replies - 10761 views)

My Spam has a Worm © 2005 by Brett Fauver AT RISE:  A doctor’s exam room.  There are various instruments of doctor usage and a MAC in ...   Mon Oct 30th, 2006 12:50 pm

Critique my Play > Psychic Friends (0 replies - 3696 views)

Psychic Friends © 2003 by Brett Fauver Bob is revealed, talking to POLICEMEN, a SECRETARY records information.     POLICEMAN #1 Thank you for coming in, Mr. Firly.     BOB You’re welcome, ...   Mon Oct 30th, 2006 12:47 pm

Critique my Play > The Great Akua Speaks with Malohinis (3 replies - 6289 views)

Thanks, I appreciate the feedback!  It truly helps. I won't answer the critiques here, as it would be better for me to just fix the problems.  I ...   Thu Oct 26th, 2006 03:12 pm

Please, introduce yourself ... > Introduction (3 replies - 6066 views)

Thanks for the warm welcome!  I hope to bring as much as I receive. Brett ...   Wed Oct 25th, 2006 07:31 pm

Critique my Play > The Great Akua Speaks with Malohinis (3 replies - 6289 views)

“The Great Akua Speaks to Malohinis” © 2004 by Brett Fauver AT RISE: Nothing but large Tiki-type idol and a few torches. ...   Wed Oct 25th, 2006 06:11 pm

Please, introduce yourself ... > Introduction (3 replies - 6066 views)

Hi, my name is Brett Fauver and I'm stuck.  I've written many unproduced dramas and comedies, sketch comedy, short plays, etc.  While I have had ...   Wed Oct 25th, 2006 05:55 pm


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